I wrote it at 11:01 pm on May 23rd, 2007.
It does unravel certain feelings I wish to smolder, Conceal, Mummify... But " Deeply disturbed " state of mind always takes over .. This is no poem, No song, No soap... Just WORDS ! Nicely - Badly arranged WORDS !
IF THIS IS MY LAST BREATH TODAY,
LET ME LIVE THIS BREATH LIKE LIFE
I DESCEND LIKE CASCADE IN YOUR ARMS,
I HEREBY EXPUNGE MY EXISTENCE
I BREATHE INSIDE U,
I BEAT WITHIN U,
I RUN IN YOUR VEINS,
I DWELL IN YOUR MIND
IF MY NAME IS THE WORD THAT U ALWAYS WISH TO SAY
THEN TELL ME WHY TODAY ARE WE FALLING APART FOREVER ??
YOUR LOVE FOR ME IS MAGNANIMOUS,I ALWAYS FALL SHORT OF WORDS
I EXTOL YOUR DIVINITY MY IDEAL IDOL - PHANTASM
MY EYES SAY ALL THAT WORDS FAIL TO EXPLICATE
MY SILENCE IS MORE PAINFUL THAN A BROKEN HEART
TODAY - LET MY SILENCE BE HEARD...
LET THE SILENCE BE FELT...
LET THE SILENCE BECOME-
OUR EYES-
YOUR EARS AND ....
MY VOICE !!
It does unravel certain feelings I wish to smolder, Conceal, Mummify... But " Deeply disturbed " state of mind always takes over .. This is no poem, No song, No soap... Just WORDS ! Nicely - Badly arranged WORDS !
IF THIS IS MY LAST BREATH TODAY,
LET ME LIVE THIS BREATH LIKE LIFE
I DESCEND LIKE CASCADE IN YOUR ARMS,
I HEREBY EXPUNGE MY EXISTENCE
I BREATHE INSIDE U,
I BEAT WITHIN U,
I RUN IN YOUR VEINS,
I DWELL IN YOUR MIND
IF MY NAME IS THE WORD THAT U ALWAYS WISH TO SAY
THEN TELL ME WHY TODAY ARE WE FALLING APART FOREVER ??
YOUR LOVE FOR ME IS MAGNANIMOUS,I ALWAYS FALL SHORT OF WORDS
I EXTOL YOUR DIVINITY MY IDEAL IDOL - PHANTASM
MY EYES SAY ALL THAT WORDS FAIL TO EXPLICATE
MY SILENCE IS MORE PAINFUL THAN A BROKEN HEART
TODAY - LET MY SILENCE BE HEARD...
LET THE SILENCE BE FELT...
LET THE SILENCE BECOME-
OUR EYES-
YOUR EARS AND ....
MY VOICE !!
5 comments:
Fascinating...I will be watching this space for more.
(For once a blog referenced on an orkut profile contained worthwhile stuff.)
Thanks Taneja ! :-) Twas nice to hear from you.. I'll make sure that u have a good time readin my blog everytime ! :-) Take care !
ur words were powerful enough to break my sleep(4am)...evry word made sense..good piece of work
our eyes, your ears and my voice....theres a lot of depth in what you write. extemporaneous, as you said, this one was, even more beautiful. i also found the post related to the tear in the left eye (m so sorry i dont remember the title and am a little lazy to refer back) profound...i like browsing blogs. found yours via via via. keep it up.
HMMM....EXCEEELENT JOBB....
THE LINES "IF DIS MA LAST.........."...NND "MY SILENCE....."...R RREALLY VERY TOUCHINGGG...
WAT? ELSE CAN I SAY.....AWWESOMEE ART ...;->
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